实例解析如何在短时间内完成一篇学术Essay

　　<a href="http://www.lxw***/new.php?id=1740">学术essay写作</a>一直是很多学留学生们头疼的问题，很多同学会说：自己连中文写作都没整明白，更别提英文了！

　　其实啊，英文写作水平和你的中文写作水平高低关系不大，尤其是PTE的大作文题目，都是有一定的“套路”可循。

　　Write essay题目考试时一般会遇到1-2题，要求大家在20分钟内按照题目要求写完一篇200-300字作文。

　　短短20分钟的时间内要完成一篇学术写作，还是很有挑战性的。所以备考PTE的同学都知道对于大作文，肯定需要准备一些“趁手”的模板，不然时间紧，任务重，很难拿到高分！

　　一般模板的使用我们会选择首尾段，因为这两段都是一些很程式化的东西，这样我们可以节约更多的时间放在中间两段内容的打磨上。

　　首段也就是你的introduction中我们必须包含的内容有：背景/题目，还有你所持的观点。

　　尾段需要你再强调一下你的conclusion，回答题目中的问题。

　　其实总结起来，也很简单，类似于咱们中文写作中的一种结构：总——分——总。

　　大家可能都听说过，大作文题目在PTE考试中是属于相对简单的题型。但是要写好一篇大作文也并非一日之功，虽说有一些巧劲可使，但重要的还是离不开同学们的大量日常练习和积累。

　　也有很多同学向我们吐槽：结构我懂了，模板我也有了，但是观点我想不出来了啊，200字都凑不够，咋办啊？？？

　　想不出观点的问题对于考生来说其实很普遍，或者给出了观点又给不出贴切的论据，高分作文和低分作文的差距就体现在这里。

　　所以今天给大家分享的例子就是为了解决这个问题：

　　Nowadays,how important people keep balance between work and life that attracted numerous controversies and drawn upon public attention.Some people believe that people keep balance between work and life is important,while the others hold the opinion that people should focus on work.As far as I concerned,I think keeping the work and life balance is important.（首段）

　　To begin with,the balance between work and life benefit to individual health that is what I think the balance is important.To be more specific,people would have more communication with family if people have a balance between work and life,and this is helpful to psychological health of individual.Furthermore,people could have enough rest from the balance after work,and this would benefit to the physical health of individual.A famous people once said that the people who could keep balance between work and life are easier to success,and this has influence on my lifestyle.

　　Meanwhile,another factor should be taken into consideration is that why it is hard to keep the balance.People usually face a problem of overtime work,and it is caused by the low efficiency during the work.Moreover,people lack the skill of time management is one of important reasons that it is hard to keep the balance between work and life.

　　To sum up,I think it is important that people could keep the balance between work and life.To address this issue,individual and society should make joint effort.（尾段）

　　修改后的范文示例：

　　Nowadays,how important people keep a balance between work and life that attracted numerous controversies and drawn upon public attention.Some people believe that people keep the balance between work and life is important,while others hold the opinion that people should focus on work.As far as I concerned,I think keeping the work and life balance is important.

　　To begin with,the balance between work and life benefits to individual health that is what I think balance is important.To be more specific,people would have more chances to communicate with family and friends,which is helpful to psychological health because of healthier social relationships and a strengthened sense of belonging and happiness.Furthermore,people could have enough rest,which benefits to physical health as they could spend more time on exercise such as yoga and tennis to help them get away from the sedentary lifestyle.By doing the balance,people get success easier and get inspiration from a diverse lifestyle.

　　Meanwhile,another factor should be taken into consideration is that why it is hard to keep the balance.Not all employees and entrepreneurs are qualified in time management,so low efficiency may be the biggest problem that results in overtime work.Also,they would probably bad to adjust themselves to family life or even communication.Moreover,the competitive environment in the job market also forces them to take extra time on work for employment skill improvements such as vocational training or online courses after working hours.

　　To sum up,I think it is important that people could keep a balance between work and life.To address this issue,individuals and society should make a joint effort.